Wednesday, August 10, 2011
How should i continue my story?
excuse the lower case letters, its faster to write. anyway, i don't know how to continue my story. please don't steal this idea, please, and please don't judge my writing, i know it's kind of showing not telling, but it gets into it later. anyway, here's the prologue: I couldn’t explain the feeling when I found out that I was diagnosed with MPD, or Mutant Power Disorder. With about seven billion people on earth, only 120 are diagnosed with the rare disease. I’m not the only one that I know of with MPD. Five of my friends, including myself, have MPD. MPD is a disease where you have special powers no one has. When most people find out someone has MPD, they think that they’re freaks. We are, at least I think. Having freaky superpowers is kind of cool, but most people, like the CIA or FBI, think that we’re going to destroy the earth. Why would I want to destroy the earth? I seriously think that the CIA, the FBI, etc. are messed up. Badly. Sorry for not introducing myself. Hey, I’m Jason Campbell. I’m fourteen and I go to Grant High School. My four best friends, Derek, the athlete, Victoria, the brains, Braden, the mysterious one, and Spencer, the laid-back one, all have MPD like me. But they didn’t know, like me, until our parents told us. You’ll understand more as the story goes on. Scientists from around the globe are trying to find a cure, but in my opinion, I don’t think there is one. Also, scientists from around the globe, especially in California where I and most people diagnosed with MPD are, are making ‘MPD Vaccinations’, where when they inject the Vaccination in them, they have powers. Crazy, right? Who would want to be a freak like my friends and I? Oh, I’m sorry. I’m spoiling the story. Sorry about that. It’s a habit. Anyway, this is the story about MPD and what it does to people. Only tell people you trust about this book. If someone evil with MPD finds out I’m telling this story, I might be a dead man. So remember, only tell the people you trust about MPD and its story. Enjoy. that was it. how should i start chapter 1? im just looking for suggestions. hope you guys can help me, i really appreciate it. thanks -Justin
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